Her purpose: to connect with her audience, perhaps even to express emotion
Her method: a well-organized five sentence paragraph that shared something about herself. Her paragraph was to have a topic sentence that gave the reader insight into her subject. She was to have 3 detail sentences to tell more about her subject. She also needed a concluding sentence to make the paragraph feel done.
Her voice: friendly
I think you'll agree that Student #23 did all that and more. Her paragraph was exceptionally well written and so I had to share it with a larger audience. Great job, #23!
Harry
Potter Book #1
My most favorite place in the whole
universe is this old, exciting, wonderful book, Harry Potter #1! I always read
this book because J.K Rowling is my favorite writer. When I read this book, I
sink into magic spells, castles, half giants, and exciting adventures with
Harry Potter. I always try to find time to read this book. Harry is always
shooting spells, “Stupefy, wingardium leviosa!”And Hermione is always learning
higher spells, “Alohomora!” Ron is always staring at Harry. I always get a
snack, get a drink and read. In my world it’s never good-bye to books! __________________________________
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5 comments:
Great writing, #23!
I checked my paper.
From #23
Great job #23! You really took me on an adventure with your words.
Your friend,
#7
Great job, that is awesome, #23.
From #10
Great writing #23 got hooked on to your story!
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